Section III WritingDirections:61. Read the following texts and write an essay to1 summarize the main points of the texts,2 make clear your own viewpoint, and3 justify your stand.In your essay, make full use of the information provided in the texts. If you use more than three consecutive words from the texts, use quotation marks .You should write 160~200 words on the ANSWER SHEET.There is a paradox in peoples thinking about the wilderness. They think uninhabited wilderness have a value simply in not being touched by humans and thus seek to preserve them at the same time wanting to visit them. In practice, the desire to visit tends to win, which puts the preservationist in a bind. If people visit, they put a value on what they visit that may make them more interested in its conservation. But what is being conserved is no longer wilderness.The preservation of truly untouched wilderness has to put a value on nature over and above what nature may offer to humans. And such a value system imposes real costs. The earth has resources that people need, especially at a time when the population is still growing and billions are desperately poor. Should some of those resources be put offlimits because some people place an aesthetic or moral value on the wildernesses where they are to be found? Or should a utilitarian approach be taken, accepting that human needs come before the needs that humans imagine for nature? Some might even argue that wildernesses are particularly good places for mines and oilfieldsbetter, if something goes wrong, that there be no humans around to get hurt.If resources are taken from the wilderness something is gained. But is something also losteven if the resources are taken out cleanly and without degradation, and if the resulting human presence is respectful? That is the question at the heart of this debate: what, exactly, is lost in such circumstances, and what is its value?Sample Script 1People respect the wilderness. But when it comes to a balance between a heart willing to preserve untouched wilderness and the reality every nation on this planet tends to exploit more for the survival of an increasing number of humanity, everything becomes a dilemma.The text demonstrates this prevament full of concerns and worries. Should we impose our needs on these places by stretching them to limit and transplanting industrious risks on them for the security of human? If we do that, what if the result pays little? But if we dont, what about our needs?Personally speaking, its an issue of value and needs, especially for the uncertainty. When we have needs, we are saturated with strong desires to meet and fulfill them. So we turn into external for help and assistant. However, not everything can be used and employed. We are bound to make evolution. By which I mean, we have to appraise those we can find and make sure it is worthwhile to make use of them. Yet under lots of circumstance, we have such an obscure vision that hardly can we judge the value. In this case, such as the wilderness we have been discussing, we begin to ponder a situation, where we make exploitation and perhaps do harm to them only to find that its not worth it.However, as far as I can see, we have to make that choice. Without any doubt should we determine to make use of untouched wilderness for our needs. On the one hand, our fellows survival goes first. We have to make sure they can survive. On the other hand, taking risks to use them is the only opportunity for us to discover more valuable things for the development of progression of the human race. To end the essay, I want to say that, the wilderness values only when we need it.评语内容内容完整，综述清楚，主旨明确，阐述合理充分。多样性句式结构多样；较灵活地使用了简单句和复合句等句式；使用了丰富的单词和词组，如：dilemmaare saturated withare bound toobscure等。结构与连贯性结构完整，条理清晰。正确使用了恰当的衔接手段，如：howeveryetOn the one handOn the other hand等。格式与语域符合语域要求，格式正确。目标读者信息传达清晰，读者可完全理解作者的意图。准确性语言准确性高，但有个别语法错误，如拼写错误：prevament。档次5Sample Script 2People often have paradox thinking about things around them. On one hand they want to get value from things. On the other hand they dont want thing go wrong. protect them from bad to wrose. Some time we cant live without the resources but we also dont want to make our life too simple.so we should balance the value and lost between what we get and what we will lost from what we have done. We can never make thing prefect, but we can choose which is the most importment.Sometimes we may have a long eye from the future.We can find a better ansower. We should think how to make thing better.评语内容提及了试题的要点，但对材料内容的概述不够清楚，自己观点的分析和论述不充分。多样性语法结构简单，词汇使用有限。结构与连贯性结构尚完整；因缺少恰当的衔接手法，连贯性差。格式与语域 格式一般，语域基本恰当。目标读者大部分语句尚可理解，但由于语言使用能力较差，语言错误较多，导致表述含混不清，影响理解。准确性语言运用存在较多语法和词汇问题，如：...want thing go wrongprotect them from bad to wroseimportment等。档次2
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