典型例题详解（2）----2012年考研英语（二）真题
Directions:
Suppose you have found something wrong with the electronic
dictionary that you bought from an online store the other day.
Write the email to the customer service centre to
1 make a complaint, and
2 demand a prompt solution.
You should write about 100 words on Answer Sheet 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Zhang
Wei" instead.
Do not write the address. 10 points
高分范文：
To whom it may concern,
I am writing to voice my dissatisfaction with an electronic
dictionary I purchased in your online store last Wednesday. This
digital dictionary is a faulty one with the following problems: for
a start, it fails to read some words properly and many entries are
mistakenly defined; in the second place, I saw several scratches on
the screen when I first unfolded the packaging, thus I wonder
whether it is a pre-owned one. You are expected to either replace
this defective one with an entirely new one or refund my
money.
Your prompt reply will be highly appreciated!
Yours,
Zhang Wei
精品译文：
敬启者：
现在写信是为了表达我对于上周三在你们网店购买的电子词典的不满。这个词典质量有缺陷，存在如下问题：首先，它不能正确读取某些单词并且错误定义了一些词条；其次，在首次打开包装的时候我在显示器上发现了几道划痕，因此我怀疑它是否为二手产品。你被要求更换该词典或者全额退款。
非常感谢你及时的答复！
你的，
张伟
闪光点剖析：
voice v.表达
faulty adj.有故障的
entry n.条
pre-owned adj.二手的
defective adj.有问题的
refund v.退款
appreciate v.感激
to whom it may concern敬启者
fail to未能够做某事
be expected to被要求做某事
prompt reply迅速答复
electronic dictionary-digital dictionary电子词典
faulty-defective有缺陷的
◆ 邀请信
基本概述：邀请信分写给亲戚、朋友之间的邀请信以及涉及到重要会议，活动的邀请信两类。无论哪一种，措辞一定要简短，扼要，热情，给人一种非常真诚和亲切的感受。邀请信的写作重点主要体现在三点：第一是邀请的提出，主要包括活动的时间，地点和内容等；第二是邀请对方参加的理由；第三点属于客套的结束语，比如热情欢迎对方的光临、对对方的答复的一种期待等。
文章架构：
● 首段：写作目的与意图
● 主体段落：明确交代具体内容，包括what , when , where , why
以及reasons，同时在适当时候也可以用少量的词语恭维一下被邀请人。
● 尾段：总结内容， 期待对方的尽快回复。
典型例题详解：------2013年考研英语（一）真题
Directions:
Write an e-mail of about 100 words to a foreign teacher in your
college, inviting his her to be a judge for the upcoming English
speech contest.
You should include the details you think necessary.
You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the e-mail, Use Li Ming
instead.
Do not write the address. 10 points
高分范文：
Dear Mr. Smith,
On behalf of the Student Union, I am sending this e-mail to you
to invite you to act as our judge of English speech contest to be
held in our university on June 5.
To be more specific , our contest is on the topic of how to
embrace tough challenges in this digital era. During this
competition, ten participants will deliver their speeches with
respect to this topic.
It is widely acknowledged that you are a top expert in this
field, so we sincerely hope that you can accept our invitation. For
further information, please call me at 88888888.
We are looking forward to your reply and arrival.
Yours respectfully
Li Ming.
精品译文：
敬爱的史密斯先生：
我代表学生会给您写这封邮件目的是邀请您担任即将在6月5日举行的英语演讲比赛的裁判。
具体来说，我们的竞赛的主题是如何在数字时代接受严峻的挑战。在这次比赛中，十名选手将就本话题发表演讲。
众所周知，你是这个领域的顶级专家，所以我们诚挚希望您能接受我们的邀请。对于进一步的信息，请给我打电话：88888888.
我们期待您的回复与到来。
李明 敬上
闪光点剖析：
1、on behalf of sb 代表某人；
2、act as 充当；work as serve as function as
都可以表达本含义，成为多样化表达的备选短语；
3、to be more specific 具体来说
4、on the topic of 主题是
5、embrace tough challenges
接受严峻的挑战（embrace原义是拥抱，这里是接受，属于形象化用法考点，在写作中出现必然是加分亮点）
6、digital era = digital times = digital age 数字时代； 数码时代
7、participants 参赛选手；
8、deliver a speech 发表演讲
9、with respect to 关于（可以作为about的同义替换闪光短语）
10、It is widely acknowledged that+句子 众所周知的是
11、top expert 顶级专家（一定要在作文中灵活使用top这种小词，地道，高分）
12、we sincerely hope that+句子 我们诚挚地希望。。。。。。
13、We are looking forward to your reply and arrival.
我们期待您的回复与到来。（邀请信结尾常用句型）
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